miércoles, 17 de junio de 2009

the story of a party


It was 3 years ago specially for the happy New Year.
My friends and I were eating and dancing in a big party and also spend many hours. I remember that the party was so far away from santiago. Everything was fine, but suddenly the police arrived and it was a big problem because the party finished at the moment, but the real problem was that the organizer of the party didn't pay the bills. When the police cancel the party, everybody was demanding for our money.
After that, my friends and I began to walk for the road empy and dark, we felt very scared because nobody wasn't there. Suddenly, we saw a hen , it was so funny because the hen looks like my best friend Guillermo. After that we began to see somethig who was moving inside the bushes, we felt very scared because we thought that there was a man who tried to steal something. we went to bushes because we needed to know who was there? for our surprise was a dog who was inside of the bushes. We felt better because it wasn't a thief.
That day has been the most scared in my life, finally the dog walked with us to home.

1 comentario:

  1. What a scary but funny evening.
    Did you read the instructions on page 51? You made a good attempt at using a variety of tenses.
    Past tense : cancel, looks,
    How would you correct this:
    nobody wasn't there

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